Sample Scored Essays
Two to three ECC faculty/staff read and score each essay giving it a single, holistic score. In holistic scoring, essays aren’t rated low solely for having many mechanical errors. Likewise, they aren’t rated high just because they are well organized. While those factors matter, the reader also considers the overall impression of the student’s writing. The score is then assigned to reflect that overall impression.
Your essay will be assigned one of the following holistic scores based on the criteria listed. Here are three anonymous student papers on discontinued topics, along with an analysis of their strengths and weaknesses. There are many ways of obtaining a particular score, so these should not be taken as templates or models to follow. Yet, they provide some concrete examples of the ways that the scoring criteria are applied in practice.
Score Assigned | Criteria | Sample Scored Essay |
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55 | The essay has a thesis and is developed with concrete, specific details in a unified and coherent way. It presents complex ideas and uses adequate vocabulary. Minor grammar, mechanics, or spelling errors do not disrupt reader understanding or focus. Student may enroll in ENG101. |
Sample ENG 101 |
44 | The essay may have a thesis responding to the topic, but supporting ideas are inconsistently specific or inadequately developed. The essay shows basic organizational skills. However, grammar, mechanics, and spelling errors are frequent or serious enough to hinder comprehension. Student needs one semester of developmental composition ENG098 to prepare for ENG101. |
Sample ENG 098 |
33 | Essay may have a thesis which responds to the topic, but the supporting ideas are undeveloped, repeated, unclear or incoherent. The essay has recurrent grammatical and syntactical problems. Student needs two semesters of developmental composition (ENG097 and 098) to prepare for ENG101. |
Sample ENG 097 |
below 33 | Readers were unable to determine your writing course placement. You will need to re-test. | - |
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